WALT: plan and write an explanation
Criteria:
1. Title
2. Identifying statement
3. Explanation sequence
4. Summary
Criteria:
1. Title
2. Identifying statement
3. Explanation sequence
4. Summary
Anthony wrote this explanation of a hose.
What do you think he did well?
What could he work on next time?
12 comments:
Well done Anthony clearly identifying what your topic was and how it works. You did a great job!
A next step might be using more specific science words.
I liked to plan the explanation
You clearly explained how to the hose turn on and off. Jimi
You told us that you liked to spray the dog in the summary. It was funny! Chloe
I think Anthony used good words in his explanation. Logan
Good job Anthony. I like how you told us how you worked the hose step by step. Georgia
I think you put everything in the right order for it to make sense. I think next time you could speak more clearly and don't make big gaps in your words.
I can't wait to see your next piece of work! Chance
You did super well in your explanation. You used lots of scientific words. Zoe
I really liked your facts. Next time you could slow down a bit with the speaking but at the end you were nice and slow. Keep it up. You did a good job. Lucy
Good job Anthony. I like how you use the Summary statement and the Identifying statement.
that was COOL YAY !
you done a good job at the hose explanation well done!!!!!
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