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Tuesday, June 22, 2010
Tui Explanation
WALT:
Write effective explanations
Success Criteria:
Use a plan with a description, information, and summary
Not use the first person
Add detail to support our ideas
Use specific scientific words
Use the present tense
Make our sentences make sense
Blog Writing
What is this poor animal thinking????
Thursday, June 10, 2010
Explanation Report
WALT:
plan and write an explanation
Criteria:
1. Title
2. Identifying statement
3. Explanation sequence
4. Summary
Anthony wrote this explanation of a hose.
What do you think he did well?
What could he work on next time?
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